Chapter 15: Those Left Behind of the yaoi, scifi novel, The Abyss, has been posted at www.RaytheReign.com! In this chapter, Anarion and Abaddon have made it away from the obvious danger, but what they find when things get quiet, is far, far worse.
A note to new people: As you might notice, this is Version 2 of The Abyss. The site is structured so that you all read the first drafts of the novel. You get to see the rawest of the raw and then your feedback helps shape the final product. The Abyss is one of the favorites on the site, but as it is a scifi novel, more back story and world building were needed than what I had accomplished in V.1. I was dissatisfied and decided I would "tweak" the beginning of the novel, but instead ended up writing something new, which caught on. The strengths of this V2 will give you a taste as to how the novels will change, based on your feedback, and all of our getting to know the characters.
Some have asked as to whether I will go back and finish V.1. I'm not sure. I definitely want to get the boys off Talos IV before I make any decisions.
In any event, see how all you have helped make this story that much better and keep that feedback coming! Let me know if you need anything.
Hugs,
Raythe